WTT: Zombie Rule #1

Let’s talk about dead grammar. There are plenty of rules for grammar which aren’t true any more. Heck, I before E actually has more words which break the rule than words that follow it. Zombie Rules, so called because they are dead but still lifelessly wander the earth looking for writers to scare off, are both helpful and a hindrance.

The zombie rules were important when you were learning to write. They helped you to write clearish sentences in elememtary school and they’ve guided a majority of your writing since then.

But you can ignore them.

Tell you what — let’s go to the grammatical diner together. We’ll split something. Have you ever had an infinitive? They say not to split it but it’s just too much for me alone.

Aren’t I hilarious? No…? Well… at any rate… not splitting infinitives is just asking to get a splitting headache.

Let’s think about it like this: In order to adequately assess if we should remove a modifier from an infinitive we have to fully understand what it will do to the sentence. How awkard would that sentence sound without the split infinitives? Would we be able to asses adequately that which we tried to understand fully? Would I sound like a pompous tool? Verily.

A more popular example would be Captain Kirk’s opening line from the Star Trek series: “To boldly go where no man has gone before!”

The statement wouldn’t be nearly as powerful if man “went boldly” where no man has gone before.

But the power of the phrase is not the only thing to be affected by an un-split infinitive. Take this example: He offered personal to guarantee the loan they needed to buy their house. Which was personal? The offer or the guarantee? Here are some fixes which make that sentence clearer:

He personally offered to guarantee…

He offered to personally guarantee…

That’s much clearer now isn’t it?

By J. M. Tuckerman

J.M.Tuckerman is a neurodivergent writer with a big education. She holds an MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults, an MA in Writing, and a BA in Writing Arts (specializing in Creative Writing, New Media Writing, and Publication; concentrating in New Media Production), which she somehow managed to earn despite her three very loud and large dogs. Jessica was lucky enough to intern at Quirk Books and Picador, USA while earning her master’s degrees. Her service dog, Ringo, is very proud of all that she has accomplished and hopes to be on a back cover of a published book with her very soon. An avid reader, writer, and lover of young adult and middle-grade literature, Jessica’s bookshelf is overflowing with hardbacks, paperbacks, and a million half-filled notebooks. She is a proud fur-mommy to two lab/st-bernard littermates, a retriever-mix service dog, and one orange little hobgoblin cat, all of whom have made very audible appearances on the Booked All Night podcast.